Flying frogs and dragons!

13 October 2017

Year 4 have been busy journalists this week, writing newspaper reports about shocking events that have taken place recently.

In Literacy this week, Year 4 wrote lots of different newspaper reports about flying frogs and flying dragons.

 

Here are some of the features we included in our writing:

- Third person

- Past tense

- Fronted adverbials (when, where and how)

- Paragraphing

- Direct and reported speech

 

We enjoyed editing our writing to make it better. We are proud of the way this has made us better journalists!

 

By Talaiyah and Saleeban.

2 comments

  • Comment Link Gracie 01 November 2017 posted by Gracie

    African drumming is amazing I wish we could do it everyday

  • Comment Link mahamudyasin 17 October 2017 posted by mahamudyasin

    can we do a harder one i love it to
    saleeban and talaiyah thancks for the display

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